How do I make this work?

A week or two ago I made this picture. And something is troubling me about it…

It shows what I saw – the colored sky, the silhouette of the trees and the running rainwater in the mud – but somehow the photograph doesn’t move me like the scenery did.

What can I do to make something like this work?

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2 thoughts on “How do I make this work?

  1. Hey Krisje,

    Karen stelt voor je contrast te verhogen. Nu lijkt de foto donker(der) dan dat je misschien wilde weergeven? – mooie scène wel, en je hebt echt oog voor je omgeving… Knap werk!

    Groetjes van ons beiden!

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